"Art, like morality, consists of drawing the line somewhere."
--G.K. Chesterton
"The man's body is sacred and the woman's body is sacred.../Each belongs here or anywhere just as much as the well-off, just as much as you."
--Walt Whitman
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According to the Buddha, right speech is a statement that is timely, true, kind, helpful (connected to liberation), and spoken with a mind of good-will. Let us all try to observe this precept.
Give me the disinterested miracle, someone else's breakfast made bigger, the fingertip sheared by the mower rejoined cozy as a found button. Give me the half-wild cat's eye luminescent in the twilit hedge, her awareness catching me up in its dark river. She shakes the dust from her ruffed face, rolls at my feet, then bolts — but not far, looking back, her startled face fringed by ladyslippers. Let me pass, mystified, through her intense, hidden story. Why else would I shiver in the April dawn to watch two scraps of blue defend their nesting box — sit on a pole, fly in circles, return, repeat — a dull, dangerous life, but not my own. I want to hear the dogwood, its squared-off ivory flowers tipped with rust like sheets stained by childbirth, rejoicing in its mission. The voice that moves the scenery sometimes gives it lines. So give me the angel telling my neighbor to catch a train. The two-headed rabbits, beloved monsters of the tabloids, the pepper with a baby inside. I don't want to be the last man alive in the restaurant, even if I can cook. Bees are weaving through the pink streamers of the weeping cherry. One interrupts its geometric language to assault my kitchen window with dreadful, comical thumps. Good glass between us keeping our lives diverse. Let me be here and also the strange mosaic in his eye.
******** The World Looks Back (v.2)
Give me the disinterested miracle, someone else's breakfast made bigger, the fingertip sheared by the mower rejoined cozy as a found button. Give me the half-wild cat's eye luminescent in the twilit hedge. She shakes the dust from her ruffed face, rolls at my feet, then bolts — but not far, looking back, her startled face fringed by ladyslippers.
Why else would I shiver in the April dawn to watch two scraps of blue defend their nesting box — sit on a pole, fly in circles, return, repeat — a dull, dangerous life, but not my own. I want to hear the dogwood, its squared-off ivory flowers tipped with rust like sheets stained by childbirth, rejoicing in its mission. The voice that moves the scenery sometimes gives it lines. So give me the angel telling my neighbor to catch a train. The two-headed rabbits, beloved monsters of the tabloids, the pepper with a baby inside. I don't want to be the last man alive in the restaurant, even if I can cook.
Bees are weaving through the pink streamers of the weeping cherry. One interrupts its geometric language to assault my kitchen window with dreadful, comical thumps. Let me be here and also the wild mosaic in his eye.
1/31/2007 5:45 PM
Alegria Imperial wrote:
I like version 2 better but don’t ask me for details. I don’t have the facility to review poetry. The truth is I’m learning deeply just now about an art I’ve been dipping into rather like an untrained child. I did study literature and poetry long ago in college and went on loving Eliot,Yeats, Lorca, Rilke, Spender, and recently Updike, etc., and now, you.
Your poem resonates much of the indifference with which humans look at the world. How so much of it abound in ‘disinterested miracles’ indeed and how much of it define our existence; and yet, how blind we really could be. Still, in spite of humans, miracles—as is the nature of Nature—just won’t crumble from blind stares. A ' startled face fringed/by lady slippers' for one or 'scraps of blue' on April dawns.
Oh yes, I like how the line of the bees string past the beginning of the stanza the way I would follow its flight on the glass, blessed glass. And the 'pink streamers of weeping cherry' that always snag hurrying steps to a halt.
I once stumbled on a feathery stone right on my apartment's sliding door. And I thought I should write an epitaph. But it's a short narrative that I spun.
Stone on my path perhaps? But a sparrow side-lain, staring.
The flight quite swift arrow-taut toward water fooled its foolish heart.
How could pea-eyes know traps between air and sky could seem nothing?
Tiny hearts spurt, sighting their longing: to a sweet sparrow wings on water.
Flitting straight on, heart on wings the water a beak within--